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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on May 29, 2005 8:35:49 GMT -5
OK guys I'm new at RPing so I don't know how things go here. So as a test or "training" for me, I'll be making this thread, OK? Here it is
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A young, female, Aldeberan kitten sat outside a restaurant. Poor, young and abandoned, this kitten covered herself from the cold with a small blanket. Only a ripped cardboard box to serve as her bed. Her clothes were too big for her and they were dirty and torn. Her fur was full of dirt and was a mess. With every animal that passed by, she would ask for food and water. One by one, she was left disappointed. When the restaurant was beginning to close, she cried and covered herself inside her cardboard box, trying to sleep the hunger and thirst away.
"I don't know why I bother. Why don't I just die? I don't have a family to look forward to and it's not like I do anything for society. I'm just waiting for something that not coming" she thought while crying under her blanket
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Post by Drake on May 29, 2005 12:05:57 GMT -5
OOC: Not sure if your wanting someone to add on, but here ya go.
After the last of the customers left the resturant, a greying black bear steps from outside the stop, waving to the last of the leaving staff and customers.
"You have yourself a good night, you hear? Things should be picking up more when the Chairmans done with his speech."
When the last of the staff fades from view, the bear turns to go back inside. Before he gets inside though, he stops.
"Wha? Either its blasted old age or mind playing a trick on me, but I think I hear crying...."
He spots the box and walks towards it.
"Hello there, is there somone there? You'll have to excuse me, my sight isn't what it used to be. Hello?"
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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on May 29, 2005 20:10:13 GMT -5
OOC: The more the merrier
The bear looked curious as he inched towards the box
"That is definitely crying I hear" thought the bear "Is anyone there?" said he
The little kitten emerged from her box, with only her eyes and the top of her head peering out. The bear looked at her and so did the kitten.
"Why I'll be, its a little street kitten" said the bear
He took a step forward and the kitten went back into her box with the blanket over her. The bear had a confusedlook but changed into a smile. He went closer to the kitten's box
"Don't be afraid. I'm just an old bear, what can I do to you?" he said
The kitten slowly peered out her head
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Post by Drake on May 29, 2005 22:17:46 GMT -5
OOC: Good, your doing well, aside from one minor problem. When RPing, its mostly your character you control through actions and words while the other person makes the reply. Ex.
Player 1: The older Terrier grins as he looks down at his son. "Son, ya made me proud. Gettin' accepted to Genus is traditon, and I'm glad ta see ya continue it. Give your old man a hug..."
Player 2: The younger terrier glances at his father, a look of embarssment on his face. "Dad, not here in the Genus Garden. Frell... you are so crazy." Drake gives his dad a quick hug, much to the snikering of the other students getting ready to head to thier respective areas of higher education.
Just helping out. Otherwise, great style. Your fanfic writting really helps out.
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Post by The psyko ninja rabbit 2000 on May 30, 2005 4:06:37 GMT -5
OOC: HOpe you don't mind me playing in this thread too folks.
IC: Having left the Gardens after the commotion, Masa walks around acorner and sees the bear standing near the box with a small head poking out of it.
"What's going on here?" She asks as she walks up to them curious.
TBCB Aldebarran child or old bear
OOC: Good start on this one. Looking forward to where it goes. ANy questions, I'll try to help or i am sure Drake can answer them too.
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Post by Drake on May 30, 2005 12:27:51 GMT -5
The owner looks over as Mesa walks up.
"Hello there. Well, seems this little kitten here doesn't seem to have a home. Myself, I was thinking that she looked mighty hungry and probbly could use some food and a warmer place then the streets."
He gestures to the resturant, than glances back at the two of them.
"My names Bruin, and would be my honor if the two of you would join me inside. Got some hot coffee and coca on the stove, plus I could probbly fix up something else if need be."
TBCB Anyone
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Post by The psyko ninja rabbit 2000 on May 31, 2005 3:06:54 GMT -5
Masa nodded and looked down at the kitten. Memories of her time as a street kitten herself flood back and she nods to teh kitten as she kneels down in front of her.
"You hungry there?" Masa asks kindly as she studies the kitten. "Wanna come and have a bite to eat and drink withus?"
She calmly reaches out and offers her hand to the kitten.
TBCB Anyone
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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Jun 2, 2005 10:09:07 GMT -5
OOC: Oh, thanks for the advice Drake, didn't know you can only control your character. And your welcome in any of my roleplaying threads that I will post in the future, Psy, including this one
IC: The small kitten look at the hand with fear. Wondering if they had intention with those that match their action. Then she heard her stomach growl and felt the dryness of her mouth. The temtation was overwhelming and she emerged from her box and grabbed Masa hand. The three of them went inside the closed restaurant. The kiten had been silent just giving glaces at both of them. Masa and the kitten sat on the table as Briun went to get food....
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Post by The psyko ninja rabbit 2000 on Jun 2, 2005 12:26:15 GMT -5
Masa set hre helmet and Katar's helmet on the table nd relaxed. She studied the kitten for a second.
"You know, i've never heard of an Aldebaran kitten being left aloone like this. WHere's your parents at, kitten?" Masa asked kindly as she studied her. "And what is your name? I'am called Masa. I'm from Atlantis."
She watched the kitten in silence as memories returned to her.
TBCB anyone
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Post by Hush Mazmanos on Jun 3, 2005 2:09:19 GMT -5
OOC:After a request for my charcater to comeback. I'm now gonna start posting in the RP board and starting here should be easier than the others.! IC:Raziel Legion walks in wearing his trademark black sneaking suit and black trenchcoat. A modifeid plasma pistol could be seen holstered on his lap and he is holding a lightsaber on his right hand. He stops and looks around and mumbles something. Suddenly Raze switches the white bladed light saber on and spins slashing something invisible and they hear a thump on the ground. And right in front of him the shape of a headless demon is formed and the body falls to the ground. The whole room was in silence and that could be heard was the humming noise Raze's saber made. He senses something wrong. And looks at the group of people in the restaurant. "None of you move a muscle!!! These things won't touch you if dont move!" He could see the kitten shivering with fear from what had just happe ned and could see a transparent blob moving towards her location. He then throws his saber at the blolb and the saber meets it's intended target and impales it against the wall and Raze unholsters his blaster and spins it around a bit and raises his arm in front of the impaed demon and stops spinning his blaster in front of it. He pulls the trigger and a crimson beam fired off the blaster and the head of the demon explodes into chunklings. "That should be all of them..." OOC:So yeah I jumped straight into action rightaway but Dahaka said he has plans for his character relating to this. So I really cant wait what he has in plan. Anyone correct me if I did anything wrong. Thanks!!  Hush Mazmanos |
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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Jun 3, 2005 4:14:57 GMT -5
The little kitten was sacred. Her entire body was shivering, her hair standing. She was breathing heavily, looking at Raziel with narrow eyes. Raziel looked at her and she grew even more afraid.....
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Post by Hush Mazmanos on Jun 3, 2005 4:37:37 GMT -5
He slowly walks to the kitten and kneels in front of her.
"You needn't be afraid. the danger is over..."
Suddenly something sends Raziel to the ceiling and then he is thrown against the wall making a small crater on the wall. He falls to the ground coughing out some blood.
"Frelling..."
Raze then sees his lightsaber was still on the impaled demon and Raze reaches his hand out and begins concentrating.
<The curse of not having to be Nharnian!>
He concetrated harder and the saber swtiched itself off and it drops on the ground so does the corpse and Raze looks to see his attacker has revealed itself instead of hiding itself in camouflage. Raze continues to concetrate and suddenly the saber flies to his hand and he activates immediately after getting a hold of it and motions to slash but the demon grabs his wrist easily and lifts Raze on the ground. The demon begins speaking to Raze in a very evil way
Demon:"You have hunted our kind long enough, Celestian! It's because of Shadow Net Hunters like you our race is slowly disappearing!"
Raze:"So? But before anything else you should always check if your prisoners are armed."
Demon:"Why is that?!"
Suddenly blaster fire rips through the demons body but it wasn't enough to kill the monstrosity. Raze lands on the ground and activates his saber and slahes upwards cutting the demon in half.
Raze(muttering):"I swear I really need a vacation... it's bad enough I have to work in the special forces but with being a Shadow Net hunter to boot is just too frellin much!"
He picks himself up and looks around and fixes himself and readies himself for more.
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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Jun 3, 2005 4:57:55 GMT -5
The little kitten got of the chair and ran behind the counter of the restaurant, peering her eyes out.......
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Post by Drake on Jun 3, 2005 7:43:56 GMT -5
Bruin pokes his head out from the kitchen, looking at the mess going on in his resturant. Thats when he sees a shimmer of a demon heading towards the guy with the lightsaber"
"Oh... great... This is gonna cost a good many simoulons to repair."
He reaches above the kitchen counter and pulls a huge maser rifle down and aims it at the demon.
"You know, I anit got a clue what you are, but considering your attacking my guests, take this!"
He fires and a huge gaping hole appears in another demon as its moves to attack Raze.
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Post by Hush Mazmanos on Jun 3, 2005 9:56:47 GMT -5
Raze looks at the gigantic hole on the demon as it slumps down to the ground, dead. He looks at Bruin and sees a demon sneak up behind him. Raze pulls out his blaster and fires at the demons head instantly killing it.
"I still owe you one for that shot earlier."
Raze said smiling.
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