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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Jan 20, 2005 3:19:12 GMT -5
I enjoyed it too. If anyone complains about this, they've obviously little taste. Thanks too corporal Dahaka, the guy surprised to see that people like his story.
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Post by Hush Mazmanos on Jan 20, 2005 4:04:49 GMT -5
See told ya they love it. ;D Oh yeah Psyko is right your the only one to get a review from Admiral Claudia
*play hits Dahaka's head*
[glow=red,2,300][/glow]
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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Jan 20, 2005 4:33:46 GMT -5
*Plays hit the Rear Admiral's stomach over and over and over*
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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Jan 20, 2005 4:38:59 GMT -5
I'm making a poll on my story to see what people think, so go to "My Fan Fic" thread and vote.
I recommend you guys to read "Demons of the Past part 2" by HUSH, its real cool.
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Post by Hush Mazmanos on Jan 20, 2005 6:44:27 GMT -5
My fic is Cool for you guys but badly edited.! Hush
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Post by Pow! on Jan 20, 2005 6:48:44 GMT -5
Wow Dahaka, congrats to be the first one getting a review from a senior writer! Now you have no reason to pull back from writing!
Geez, I need to finish exams so I can catch up with things!! >_<
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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Jan 20, 2005 6:51:06 GMT -5
Wow Dahaka, congrats to be the first one getting a review from a senior writer! Now you have no reason to pull back from writing! Geez, I need to finish exams so I can catch up with things!! >_< Another good comment, thanks, now I have more reason to write part 2. Good luck in your exams
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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Jan 20, 2005 6:53:20 GMT -5
My fic is Cool for you guys but badly edited.! Hush I know it's badly edited but we would know what it means anyway.
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Post by Hush Mazmanos on Jan 20, 2005 6:58:39 GMT -5
Good luck on your Exams form Hell Pow. And I promise to eidt my crappy fic
[glow=red,2,300]Hush[/glow]
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Post by Claudia Carranza on Jan 20, 2005 8:31:14 GMT -5
Really? I'm the only writer to get Claudia out? Your bluffing!!!!!!! I'm sure at least Hush can get Claudia out. He's written better than I have, that's for sure. It's true. I generally don't read fanfics on any site. They muck with my own story lines, but I've found myself in a slup and needs inspiration and a rediscovery of my writer's voice. (I think I've been too long from script writing. I keep wanting ot make everything prose!) I read you had a new fic up and thought I'd take a glance. I've got more to read now, as the first scene in Psychorabbit's.... I forget the title, but hte first one under his listing, has me intrigued. Clau
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Post by Claudia Carranza on Jan 20, 2005 10:22:41 GMT -5
"Shadows From the Past" by Psychorabbit2000. I'm usually not a fan of fanfictions. I have so many story lines of my own, that reading someone else can leave me confused about where my own story is going. Since October, when Season 4 was being pushed for restarting, I had lost the feel and tone of the current script I'm writing for the web series. It was sheer happenstance and more than a little boredom at work that had me read Andrew Norris's fanfic. It was in commenting on it pubically, and having the rest of you tell me openly, that I realized I never have given the readers of the web series the same courtsey they give me: reading and commenting on their work. I did some thinking about it yesterday afternoon and into the evening, and even skimmed the opening to Psychorabbit's "Shadows From the Past" briefly. The first two scenes hooked me, and helped me come to the full realization that in order to write and write well one must first read. To that end, I have now throughtly read and completely enjoyed "Shadows From the Past". The script left me smiling, and sad for Katrina and her teen-aged love. The care with which Psychorabbit handled what has been revealed about Aldebaran culture thus far, in the web series and in the questions that have been answered, is awe-inspiring - to say the least. More importantly, the script has reminded me of the tone that I had lost, the tone I think my current work needs in order to get across the storylines and plot twists I need. My deepest gratitude and standing ovation goes to Psychorabbit on this particular script (I'll be reading the others as time permits), and I'd like him to contact me privately at his convinence regarding it and some of the characters and concepts. On a related subject, a minor editting thing I've noticed in the Aldebaran scripts is as follows: - The Queen should be refered to as Her Majesty, as it is the title of the highest ranking female in a monarchy, not as Her Highness. Highness is for Princes and Princesses. The Queen's just slightly above that, I think. Claudia Carranza, a changed writer who now needs to read all fanfics. Thank you.
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Post by Norris on Jan 20, 2005 10:59:46 GMT -5
Personally, I think that FanFictions that talk about a different side of the Aniverse, inside or out of the UAC, is cool with me.
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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Jan 21, 2005 2:00:18 GMT -5
See!!! Psy was able to get her out!!! She reviewed my story first since she read it first!!! I'm sure if she read Psy's or Hush's story first, she would have reviewed them first!!!
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Post by The psyko ninja rabbit 2000 on Jan 21, 2005 2:34:00 GMT -5
*blushing slightly* For once, the smart aleck rabbit has nothing to say! Anyways, Thanks Claudia for a reply like that. I hope you enjoy the other scripts as much as Shadows From the Past. Ture Dahaka, but it was the script of a new writer that caught her eye. Don't sell youself short. Keep up the good work! Psykorabbit2000
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Post by Norris on Jan 21, 2005 3:05:08 GMT -5
Same here! Keep those stories coming!
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