Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Aug 5, 2005 8:41:17 GMT -5
Its been quite a time since I first posted "My Song" thread, asking for lyrics to go with my compositions. Well I finally made ONE. Its about problems you face in life, and that some of them you cannot face on your own and need another hand to pick you up, so to speak. Critique is recommended, but not required LOL:
Intro
(Faded Voice)
1,2,3,4
Verse
I can't stand this pain
I'm feeling tonight
Would you help me through the rain
and regain my sight
And my life's fallen to pieces
and all apart
And my never never seizes
to break my heart
Chorus
So would you help
me tonight
I can't do this by myself
I need to make these things right
Would you pick my up
if I fall down
So I can fly like a dove
not strapped to the ground
Verse 2
Show me the light
do it for me
Cause I have tried (said in a way to rhyme with 'light')
but I didn't succeed
You're the only one
who can make me
Stand up and run
so I can see faded voice: once again
Chorus
So would you help
me tonight
I can't do this by myself
I need to make these things right
Would you pick my up
if I fall down
So I can fly like a dove
not strapped to the ground
Interlude
(planning to put lyrics here but for now, guitar riff)
Chorus
So would you help
me tonight
I can't do this by myself
I need to make these things right
Would you pick my up
if I fall down
So I can fly like a dove
not strapped to the ground
Cont Chorus
So set me free
into the night
But I will see
that I can flyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy (LOL)
(Wait one guitar riff)
So I can keep movin' on
So I can keep livin' on
So I can keep drivin' on
So I can keep flying on
Outro
(Faded Voice)
Fly!
Like the dove in the air
Intro
(Faded Voice)
1,2,3,4
Verse
I can't stand this pain
I'm feeling tonight
Would you help me through the rain
and regain my sight
And my life's fallen to pieces
and all apart
And my never never seizes
to break my heart
Chorus
So would you help
me tonight
I can't do this by myself
I need to make these things right
Would you pick my up
if I fall down
So I can fly like a dove
not strapped to the ground
Verse 2
Show me the light
do it for me
Cause I have tried (said in a way to rhyme with 'light')
but I didn't succeed
You're the only one
who can make me
Stand up and run
so I can see faded voice: once again
Chorus
So would you help
me tonight
I can't do this by myself
I need to make these things right
Would you pick my up
if I fall down
So I can fly like a dove
not strapped to the ground
Interlude
(planning to put lyrics here but for now, guitar riff)
Chorus
So would you help
me tonight
I can't do this by myself
I need to make these things right
Would you pick my up
if I fall down
So I can fly like a dove
not strapped to the ground
Cont Chorus
So set me free
into the night
But I will see
that I can flyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy (LOL)
(Wait one guitar riff)
So I can keep movin' on
So I can keep livin' on
So I can keep drivin' on
So I can keep flying on
Outro
(Faded Voice)
Fly!
Like the dove in the air