My Song pt 2

1treehill S.P.A.C.E. Lieutenant Jesse McCartney! Posts: 75	My Song pt 2 Aug 30, 2005 4:43:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by 1treehill on Aug 30, 2005 4:43:21 GMT -5 yeh in away i kindda relate to it. No Offence why Dove?!? XD
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My Song pt 2 Aug 31, 2005 21:07:22 GMT -5

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Post by joey jo jo on Aug 31, 2005 21:07:22 GMT -5

1treehill said:

yeh in away i kindda relate to it. No Offence why Dove?!? XD

Well it fits the conventions of a romantic, balladish song. What else would you have? Raven? Buzzard? Pigeon?

Nice song Dahaka

the lyrics, to me, are reminiscent of Lynyrd Skynyrd - Freebird... which I think is a good thing.

Hush Mazmanos Ultimate Emblem Assassin of 9.0 Posts: 1,413	My Song pt 2 Sept 1, 2005 5:20:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hush Mazmanos on Sept 1, 2005 5:20:13 GMT -5 Hey new member!! Anyways all good reviews, Dahaka. I think someone is in love to actually be able to write stuff this good.! Hush Mazmanos
	I Bleed for this and I Bleed for you..I'm not hiding behind my mask to hide my rage, pain and sorrow. The mask I wear brings out all the sh*t inside me I hate. It helps me drive out all those useless emotions. Plus it hurts like hell while wearing it so it helps build up even more intensity in what Im doing.

1treehill S.P.A.C.E. Lieutenant Jesse McCartney! Posts: 75	My Song pt 2 Sept 1, 2005 6:33:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by 1treehill on Sept 1, 2005 6:33:38 GMT -5 well Dahaka has this happend to you ?
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My Song pt 2 Sept 2, 2005 5:19:48 GMT -5

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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Sept 2, 2005 5:19:48 GMT -5

NO!, just something that came out while playing the song itself, and ots not a love story LOL.

Thanks for the good review Joe

As for the dove, well first reason was it fitied well to the style of the song. Second was it was the only name of a bird that was close to ryhming with "up"

What is the definition of Impossible? It is a limit to a soldier's stength. Once something is impossible, you have reached your limit. But every limit can be broken. Only the brave and honorable stand out to do the impossible-Razgriz, I really made this quote, hehe

1treehill S.P.A.C.E. Lieutenant Jesse McCartney! Posts: 75	My Song pt 2 Sept 2, 2005 21:59:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by 1treehill on Sept 2, 2005 21:59:59 GMT -5 The thing that i find really weird is its a dove but you talk about pain. A Dove Simbolizes Freedom not pain.
	"Work like you don’t need the money, dance like nobody is watching and live like you’ve never been hurt."

1treehill S.P.A.C.E. Lieutenant Jesse McCartney! Posts: 75	My Song pt 2 Sept 2, 2005 22:54:49 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by 1treehill on Sept 2, 2005 22:54:49 GMT -5 And Its True.
	"Work like you don’t need the money, dance like nobody is watching and live like you’ve never been hurt."

Razgriz aka Dahaka Keeper of the Dualitica PRS - Pure Revolutionary Sound Posts: 1,756	My Song pt 2 Sept 3, 2005 5:16:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Sept 3, 2005 5:16:48 GMT -5 Dude check the lyrics first LOL
	What is the definition of Impossible? It is a limit to a soldier's stength. Once something is impossible, you have reached your limit. But every limit can be broken. Only the brave and honorable stand out to do the impossible-Razgriz, I really made this quote, hehe

Razgriz aka Dahaka Keeper of the Dualitica PRS - Pure Revolutionary Sound Posts: 1,756	My Song pt 2 Sept 3, 2005 5:18:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Sept 3, 2005 5:18:16 GMT -5 It says something about being set free from the pain and blah blah blah
	What is the definition of Impossible? It is a limit to a soldier's stength. Once something is impossible, you have reached your limit. But every limit can be broken. Only the brave and honorable stand out to do the impossible-Razgriz, I really made this quote, hehe

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My Song pt 2 Sept 3, 2005 5:24:33 GMT -5

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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Sept 3, 2005 5:24:33 GMT -5

And one more thing Dove's symbol is freedom, universally, but Dove can have a contextual symbol. For example Heart is a universal symbol for love but in this poem/story/song/etc it contextually symbolizes Death. You get me? Now in my song Dove means both freedom, friendship and resolution, or something like those

What is the definition of Impossible? It is a limit to a soldier's stength. Once something is impossible, you have reached your limit. But every limit can be broken. Only the brave and honorable stand out to do the impossible-Razgriz, I really made this quote, hehe

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Post by joey jo jo on Aug 31, 2005 21:07:22 GMT -5

Post by Hush Mazmanos on Sept 1, 2005 5:20:13 GMT -5

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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Sept 2, 2005 5:19:48 GMT -5

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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Sept 3, 2005 5:16:48 GMT -5

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Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Sept 3, 2005 5:24:33 GMT -5