Post by Razgriz aka Dahaka on Oct 19, 2005 8:12:42 GMT -5
Here it is, my 2nd song fully composed:
The Battle of Yin and Yang
by Razgriz
Verse 1
When we are newly born,
It may be a sun or moon,
To be cleaned or to be torn,
This will happen all too soon
While one takes over,
The other one is thrown away,
Yet it doesn't go farther,
Though its little its here to stay
Chorus
You start out on a pitchforked road,
One path yields soil and the other is snow,
But as you walk down, with the powers of joy or wrath,
You can see bits and pieces of the other path
Verse 2
So whose soldier will you be,
Out of these two forces,
What will become of thee,
What power will you possess
But then deep inside,
That infested heart,
Is something that lies,
Which is never to depart
Chorus
You start out on a pitchforked road,
One path yields soil and the other is snow,
But as you walk down, with the powers of joy or wrath,
You can see bits and pieces of the other path
Bridge
Cause the way the sun is shining down,
Is the same way that acid rain, burns the ground,
And both of them will have their affects on anything touch,
While Yin and Yang are fighting inside of us
SOLO
Chorus
You start out on a pitchforked road,
One path yields soil and the other is snow,
But as you walk down, with the powers of joy or wrath,
You can see bits and pieces of the other path
Outro
Just like how both Yin and Yang have those small dots
Which btoh yield the color which they are not
Cause if your heart is good, it has a darker side
And if it is black, there will shine a light
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Well thats it, The Battle of Yin and Yang. To keep the conversation up for a bit longer, what do you guys the song is about. Just wondering if its too poetic to the point my listeners wont understand. And I'm just ASKING if you guys would like to rate over ten. You dont have to if you dont want to
The Battle of Yin and Yang
by Razgriz
Verse 1
When we are newly born,
It may be a sun or moon,
To be cleaned or to be torn,
This will happen all too soon
While one takes over,
The other one is thrown away,
Yet it doesn't go farther,
Though its little its here to stay
Chorus
You start out on a pitchforked road,
One path yields soil and the other is snow,
But as you walk down, with the powers of joy or wrath,
You can see bits and pieces of the other path
Verse 2
So whose soldier will you be,
Out of these two forces,
What will become of thee,
What power will you possess
But then deep inside,
That infested heart,
Is something that lies,
Which is never to depart
Chorus
You start out on a pitchforked road,
One path yields soil and the other is snow,
But as you walk down, with the powers of joy or wrath,
You can see bits and pieces of the other path
Bridge
Cause the way the sun is shining down,
Is the same way that acid rain, burns the ground,
And both of them will have their affects on anything touch,
While Yin and Yang are fighting inside of us
SOLO
Chorus
You start out on a pitchforked road,
One path yields soil and the other is snow,
But as you walk down, with the powers of joy or wrath,
You can see bits and pieces of the other path
Outro
Just like how both Yin and Yang have those small dots
Which btoh yield the color which they are not
Cause if your heart is good, it has a darker side
And if it is black, there will shine a light
-----------------------------------------------
Well thats it, The Battle of Yin and Yang. To keep the conversation up for a bit longer, what do you guys the song is about. Just wondering if its too poetic to the point my listeners wont understand. And I'm just ASKING if you guys would like to rate over ten. You dont have to if you dont want to
Which really makes me happy!!!