Post by Hush Mazmanos on Oct 24, 2004 9:13:57 GMT -5
Ok heres a preview of my Fan fic which I hope I could finish by December 
. So When you guys are done reading it Please by all means Give me comments or Sugestions on the Fic. And please point out any mistakes I have made in this preview. Ok heres goes nothing... oh yeah before I forget read and review! Ok thanks!!! XD
Demons of the Past
Aldebaran 700 years ago...
A young Aldebaran boy who had Dark Blue Fur and Silver hair and Purple eyes, who was no older than 3 years old, was running along toward his house for a reason unknown to him.
Young Boy
(panting)
"Sheesh... Why does Dad want me to get back home so early?"
The young boy slowed down when he caught sight of his house and he began walking since he was tired from his sprint earlier. As he entered the house he beganto wlk to his father's room when he heard his name being called from the living room.
Voice
"Juno? You there, son?"
The voice belonged to Juno's Father, Devon
Juno
"Here dad!" Whats all this about asking master Marcus to go back home?"
Devon
(Excitedly)
"Come here and you'll see."
Juno followed his father to the living room where he saw 4 guests in the living. One Black male Aldebaran Assassin, 2 Sisters; 1 sister was tan furred and the other was white furred and the fourth person was Gray furred female.
Juno
(anxious)
"What's all this about?"
Devon
(Happily)
"You'll see..."
Then the Gray furred female walked toward Juno and knelt in front of him so she could see him eye to eye. Juno saw the Insignia on her shoulder o what looked like the Thought Order.
The lady
(Calmly)
"You are Juno Am I correct?"
Juno just nods.
The Lady
"Well, My name is Jesca... I am the head of the Thought Order."
(motions to her accomplices)
"That lady over there with the white fur is Aurora, She is the head of the healing order and that Brown furred Lady over there is Millia, Head of the Combat order and That man over there is Zeek the representative of the Elders in the Emblem Assasins."
Juno simply looks at his dad then to Jesca and at the other three at the back.
Juno
(confused)
"I don't mean to offend you or anything but why are all of you here?"
Aurora
"We all have come to give you something that not everyone can receive on a regular basis..."
Then Millia continues...
Millia
"We cannot fully explain it you but Zeek here is the only one who can."
Then Jesca stands up and returns to her companions and Zeek walks toward Juno and kneels in front of Juno like the way Jesca did.
Zeek
(neutrally)
"Do you take your history classes seriously?"
Juno
(a bit scared)
"Y...yes..."
Juno saw the right eye of Zeek. It looked more or less like a Demon's eye.
Zeek
"You need not be afraid... My eye may look like this but I'm definitely not a demon..."
And then Zeek Pulls out a small rectangular box made of steel with a rather reddish glow surrounding it and he hands it in front of Juno.
Zeek
(neutrally)
"We are all aware o the Abilities you possess and this box here can only be opened by somebody who has powers similar to yours... Your a smart boy right? Tell me what is this power you posess and what can it do?"
Juno
(Anxious)
"Cosmic Energy... Pure cosmic energy... Its more unique than any form of magic known to aldebaran kind. It's even more powerful than Sorecery and Rune magic for it derives from all living matter. The Aniverse itself is filled with cosmic energy. This is the Universal Force that embraces the whole cosmos."
Zeek
(chuckling)
"Devon, Quite a prodigy you have here..."
Devon
(Happily)
"He's quite advanced for his age."
Zeek
(looks at Juno)
"Open this box with those powers... This box was made to be opened by someone with your powers..."
Juno
(Shocked)
"B...but I let my gems with my master!"
Zeek
"You don't need your gems to practice this power! Now perform a unlocking spell with only your thoughts."
And Juno takes the box from Zeek and focuses to open the box. After Five minutes of silence a loud crack could be heard in the living room. and the Red glow on the box disappeared and it snapped open.
And Zeek gasped when he saw what was inside the box and he showed it to Zeek.
Juno
(Confused and shocked)
"Whats this?"
Juno looked at the box again. And inside was a plaque. And on it was what seemed to be a demon skull with an insgina on it. Juno moved the plaque closer to his face to get good look at the insignia and saw it looked like a reversed N and there was a spike in the middle of the reversed N.
Juno
(Now gettting Frustrated)
"What's this supposed to be?"
Zeek
(Smiling)
"Juno, That there is the Insignia of the Emblem Assassins and You just passed the Initiation..."
To be continued...
Ok so tell me what you guys think and give me comments and suggestions on this fic so i can make up for the mistakes I've made. Ok thanks you guys ^_^
I dont own any of the terms and names that i had just used here. The names and terms in Ragnarok are Property of Lee-Myung-Jin and And the names and terms in Bucky oHare are porperty of continuity comics. I don't own anything in this fic Except Juno, Devon, Milia, Aurora and Jesca. XD
. So When you guys are done reading it Please by all means Give me comments or Sugestions on the Fic. And please point out any mistakes I have made in this preview. Ok heres goes nothing... oh yeah before I forget read and review! Ok thanks!!! XDDemons of the Past
Aldebaran 700 years ago...
A young Aldebaran boy who had Dark Blue Fur and Silver hair and Purple eyes, who was no older than 3 years old, was running along toward his house for a reason unknown to him.
Young Boy
(panting)
"Sheesh... Why does Dad want me to get back home so early?"
The young boy slowed down when he caught sight of his house and he began walking since he was tired from his sprint earlier. As he entered the house he beganto wlk to his father's room when he heard his name being called from the living room.
Voice
"Juno? You there, son?"
The voice belonged to Juno's Father, Devon
Juno
"Here dad!" Whats all this about asking master Marcus to go back home?"
Devon
(Excitedly)
"Come here and you'll see."
Juno followed his father to the living room where he saw 4 guests in the living. One Black male Aldebaran Assassin, 2 Sisters; 1 sister was tan furred and the other was white furred and the fourth person was Gray furred female.
Juno
(anxious)
"What's all this about?"
Devon
(Happily)
"You'll see..."
Then the Gray furred female walked toward Juno and knelt in front of him so she could see him eye to eye. Juno saw the Insignia on her shoulder o what looked like the Thought Order.
The lady
(Calmly)
"You are Juno Am I correct?"
Juno just nods.
The Lady
"Well, My name is Jesca... I am the head of the Thought Order."
(motions to her accomplices)
"That lady over there with the white fur is Aurora, She is the head of the healing order and that Brown furred Lady over there is Millia, Head of the Combat order and That man over there is Zeek the representative of the Elders in the Emblem Assasins."
Juno simply looks at his dad then to Jesca and at the other three at the back.
Juno
(confused)
"I don't mean to offend you or anything but why are all of you here?"
Aurora
"We all have come to give you something that not everyone can receive on a regular basis..."
Then Millia continues...
Millia
"We cannot fully explain it you but Zeek here is the only one who can."
Then Jesca stands up and returns to her companions and Zeek walks toward Juno and kneels in front of Juno like the way Jesca did.
Zeek
(neutrally)
"Do you take your history classes seriously?"
Juno
(a bit scared)
"Y...yes..."
Juno saw the right eye of Zeek. It looked more or less like a Demon's eye.
Zeek
"You need not be afraid... My eye may look like this but I'm definitely not a demon..."
And then Zeek Pulls out a small rectangular box made of steel with a rather reddish glow surrounding it and he hands it in front of Juno.
Zeek
(neutrally)
"We are all aware o the Abilities you possess and this box here can only be opened by somebody who has powers similar to yours... Your a smart boy right? Tell me what is this power you posess and what can it do?"
Juno
(Anxious)
"Cosmic Energy... Pure cosmic energy... Its more unique than any form of magic known to aldebaran kind. It's even more powerful than Sorecery and Rune magic for it derives from all living matter. The Aniverse itself is filled with cosmic energy. This is the Universal Force that embraces the whole cosmos."
Zeek
(chuckling)
"Devon, Quite a prodigy you have here..."
Devon
(Happily)
"He's quite advanced for his age."
Zeek
(looks at Juno)
"Open this box with those powers... This box was made to be opened by someone with your powers..."
Juno
(Shocked)
"B...but I let my gems with my master!"
Zeek
"You don't need your gems to practice this power! Now perform a unlocking spell with only your thoughts."
And Juno takes the box from Zeek and focuses to open the box. After Five minutes of silence a loud crack could be heard in the living room. and the Red glow on the box disappeared and it snapped open.
And Zeek gasped when he saw what was inside the box and he showed it to Zeek.
Juno
(Confused and shocked)
"Whats this?"
Juno looked at the box again. And inside was a plaque. And on it was what seemed to be a demon skull with an insgina on it. Juno moved the plaque closer to his face to get good look at the insignia and saw it looked like a reversed N and there was a spike in the middle of the reversed N.
Juno
(Now gettting Frustrated)
"What's this supposed to be?"
Zeek
(Smiling)
"Juno, That there is the Insignia of the Emblem Assassins and You just passed the Initiation..."
To be continued...
Ok so tell me what you guys think and give me comments and suggestions on this fic so i can make up for the mistakes I've made. Ok thanks you guys ^_^
I dont own any of the terms and names that i had just used here. The names and terms in Ragnarok are Property of Lee-Myung-Jin and And the names and terms in Bucky oHare are porperty of continuity comics. I don't own anything in this fic Except Juno, Devon, Milia, Aurora and Jesca. XD
